After much hemming and hawing I have finally decided on Newlin's piece. I think mainly because it sounded like a poem a kid would write, however, I wish I had the space in my book to use both pieces. I love the whole 1950's "B" movie feel of Stephen Rogers' piece! Of course both will receive drawings of Clark!
I'm trying something different, I've been laying out some of the stories for the book. So I'm posting a reformatted image of the pages for this story. The book is designed to be 8"x8" so I stacked the pages. I'm also looking for a publisher (I might self-publish with the gallery) but I really think the stories deserve more than this.)
Well here it is!